AAZADI – Freedom To Your Thoughts!
KYA HUM AAZAD HAI?
Aadhi se zyada janta insaaf ke liye mar rahi hai
Aaj bhi ladkiyaan sunsaan raste pe akele chalne se dar rahi hai,
Desh ne to 1950 me hi bana liya tha apna sanvidhaan
Par aaj bhi Arunachal Pradesh wale hai yahan mehmaaan,
KYA HUM AAZAD HAI?
Aazadi prapt kare hue ho gayi hai muddat
Aaj bhi deni padti hai har kaam ke liye rishwat,
Dharam ke naam pe ja rahi hai masumon ki jaan
Bhookha mar raha hai desh ka kisaan,
Isme kisi akele ka nahi, hum sabka hai dosh
Desh to aazad hai par bandhan me hai humari Soch!!!
– Deepak Malhotra
Waw…..
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Thanks alot 😊
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Desh to aajad h pr bndhan mai h hmari soch .👍👍👍👍👍great line
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Thanks Rishabh 😊
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Thanks a lot Rishabh 🙂
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Wow! Very well written 😍🇮🇳
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Thanks a lot 😊😊😊
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Ryt bhai
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Thanks 🙂
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ekdum sahi😇
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Thanks 🙂
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Great peom 👍
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Thanks Shash
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happy republic day
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Happy Republic Day to you too
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Excellent👍
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Thanks a lot Ayushi 😇😇😇
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Truly a sarcasm over the conditions prevalent…Ur work shows u dnt shy away from being mordant
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Thanks a lot. 😊😊😊
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Bahut sundar
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Thanks a lot 😇
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Very nice
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Thanks a lot 💟
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Really great
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Thanks a lot 💟
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Right sir we all need to change our thoughts by which we can change our country
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Sahi pakde hain…:P
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Janab apke shayara
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Lekh ke hum fan ho gyw
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Gye
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Acha likhte ha app
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Bhaut Bahut Dhanyavaad
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Your welcome sir ☺️☺️
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Keep writing sir 😊👌🏻
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Thanks. Surely I will 🙂
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Hum bhi likhte ha pr apse to niche niche hi apki rhyme rhyme mila hume acha laga apki syari me sir usey kyam rakhiye or achi achi shayri dete rhiye
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Aap bhi bahut khoob likhte hai. Keep writing 🙂
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Thank you sir
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I haven’t read better hindi poems till now. Really awesome poem
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Thanks for the wonderful comment. Really means a lot to me. 😍
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Loved the last line!
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Thanks 🙏🙏🙏
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Beautiful!
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Thanks:)
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beautifully written!!!!
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Thanks. Glad that you liked it 😊
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Waah.. Sahi kaha.
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Thanks 😊😊😊
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Wow. Your thoughts are beautiful and so is your blog. Glad to read such honest posts…
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This is one of the best compliments I have received. Thanks a lot. Really means a lot to me 🙂
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Just told the truth 🙂
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I am so Glad 🙂
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🙂
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Bahot he khoob..Sacchai jhalakti hai aapki likavat mein sir:-)♥
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Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment 💝
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Each line depicts a fact beautifully.
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Thanks a lot for the appreciation sir 😊
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