Choor aye vo galiyaan us raat ke bad,
Kabhi na dekha palat kar, us baat ke baad;
Shayad ankahi si ek kashish thi mausam mai bhi,
Lagta hai fir milane ke peeche tha kayinat ka hath;
Manzil aur raste to aaj bhi ek hai,
Bas is waqt halaat thode badle hai;
Humare khwaboon mai to aaj bhi vo hai,
Par unke humsafar badle hai;
– Deepak Rawat
wah… bahut sundar 🙂
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Shukriya Ashish 🙂
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:-*:-*:-) super
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Thanks alot Bhai 😅😘
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Nicely written
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Thanks alot 😊
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super se upaad😍
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Thanks debasmita 😊
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Nyc lines
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Thanks alot Bhai 😊
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Gud bhai
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Thanks Isha 😊
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Nice work, keep it up..
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Thanks Rishabh 😊
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nice……😊😊
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Thanks 😊
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Waah waah ❤
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Thanks alot Kritika 😊
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Nice man…..I think You gonna become a good writer
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Thanks alot Sarvagya
That means alot 😊
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Awesome lines Deep da.. 👌
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Thanks Naveen da😊
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Bhai ye lines dil ko touch kar gayi bhut accha likha hai …Really appreciated……
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Thanks alot bro 😊
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Good poetry 💕
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Thanks a lot 💟
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Oh.very bad kick on heart.
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Bahut khoob deepak
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Shukriya Rohit!!!
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Wooow
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Thanks ☺️☺️
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Boht khoob.. 👏🏼👏🏼
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Shukriya 😊😊😊
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Wha wha kya baat ha ☺️☺️
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya…:)
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:’) Khoobsurat
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Shukriya 💝
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Simply beautiful. No words can do justice to how beautiful this poem is and the pain it reveals.
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Thanks a lot💝
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Beautiful.
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Thanks:)
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Beautiful❤
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Thanks a lot.
Really Really glad that you like it 🙂
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Dil se likha h…ati sunder (y)
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Shukriya 😇
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